Nature Cycle
Nature is really a great gift of god!
So instead of spoiling it we should try to save it. Shouldn't we?
Well , see this!
The water ponds in the fields
Evaporates and forms clouds....
When the water condenses,
In my curious mind .... arises doubts!!
The rain water falls on the ground
And the sweet green grass grows......
Making greenery all around
Even under my toes!!
Then again the ponds are filled,
Water again evaporates
Clouds get filled to the brim....
And then the water condenses!!
The cycle continues so and so!
Your natural opinion , I wan to know!!
14 comments:
Dearie,loved the lines,and loved more that you are in love with nature ...sweet and yes observe more and more..
Mol,just put this poem in front of you,read more and more and try to edit it this time...may be interesting..Am sure you can write even better..!!
Ummmmma
Many Greetings from Romania. You have a very nice blog with lot of color and text that you represent. See you soon!
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thank you very much ann
u know I am a little busy these days so will make changes soon!
I totally agree with Ann little gal...I know you have great talents and with a little bit of editing this poem will look just as great as the way you observe nature. You know you are blessed to be able to love and feel nature. I don't know but maybe you can play with different words rather than repeating them?? Excuse me if I am being stupid as I don't have much idea about writing poem and all ..your thoughts are so vivid and if you use more words to express things like about pond, evaporation and condensation I guess it would sound heavenly...
hugss
ya , I too agree with her ... I could make the poem better!
thank you very much for telling me
keep visiting!
Thats good...lines..loved ur blog too
thank u pavithra
keep visiting!!
Nice poem Little POetess..But u can improve as u have written many better poems. Awaiting more..Do visit and follow my blog! Bye!
Ur friend
Awesome fantastic Blog.....I really extremely liked ur blog a lot:) u r an excellent blogger:) keep blogging....I am really deeply touched by ur poetry:) Keep Blogging:) All the Very Best Success:)
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Excellent.....Superb Post:) Keep Sharing ur thoughts, feelings:)
thnx sonshu
will visit ur blog soon!
thank u very much
creativity!!
lol..i loved the last bit of ur poem!!
real nice :)
thank u Rush!
keep visiting!
love,
lil poetess
thank you geanina codita
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