A Starry Night
Hi
I am back with a new poem!
On a dark dark night,
When nothing was in sight
The Dark and hazy sky .......
Without the birds flying by!
With only few spots of light
Here and there ... Left and right
From the twinkling stars
All over the sky!
The full moon which is bright
Its lovely white
Its like a guiding lamp in the night
Which guides us to path which is right!
Loneliness covers the beautiful earth
Spreading over the whole place
Makes us feel so solitary...
In the dark lonely night!
Hope you like it!
12 comments:
Wow!!! Its amazing poetess....cool! OKies abt my 150th heres the link but it wont come in internet explorer, only thru firefox!
http://sonshus.blogspot.com/2009/05/150-celebration-time.html
So if u dont ahve firefox tehn dwld it or else ill mail u ur award!
Beautiful Fantastic Poem Dear :) At age of 12yrs, u r so talented :) keep coming up with new writings:) every tym, whenever I visit, I get relaxed reading to ur poems :) Its a great pleasure to read ur poems:)
Thanks a lot for sharing Dear :)
*Hugs*
Love,
Creativity :)
thank u sonshu very much
keep visiting
thnx creativi keep visitingty
thnx creativi keep visitingty
Superb poem littlepoetess!
Keep writing!
Love
Ria
Wow you are writing so much about Loneliness..at this age tell me are you starting to feel lonely little princess?? I love the poem it's beautiful...sorry couldn't comment earlier as I was on a little vacation. Hey gimme ur email id will you...
Hi Little Poetess..first time to your blog..oh my at this age you write so wonderfully girl..very touching keep it up dear :) will visit again!!
" in the dark dark night
with stars shining so bright
how can you be lonely,little poetess
when you have such thoughts to write"
:))
hi,little poetess!!!
so young and so beautiful you write..!!! i only started writing poems when i was in my Class 8th at age 13 and i used to thought i started early :O..
little poetess, you rock!!! keep writing..
Hey dear...superb poem..u r an excellent poetess indeed..nice blog dear..amazing poems...
"Loneliness covers the beautiful earth
Spreading over the whole place
Makes us feel so solitary...
In the dark lonely night! ""
beautiful words and thoughts.
warm wishes from Jp appooppan
jayaprakash vettiyattil
trichur 680021
hello little poetess
why nothing for the month of august?
i feel like meeting you. so far you are the youngest blogger i have seen. my cousin dr rakesh's daughter keerthana 7 years is in the process of creating a blog.
but she has nothing special like you.
you are a genious like your mum.
wish you all the best.
regards
jp
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