Saturday, May 16, 2009

When Loneliness Overcomes.,....

Hello again friends!
Here 's a new poem!
Its on an emotion -- LONELINESS
And our sudden feelings..........

From somewhere I heard
The jingles of bangles .....
From somewhere I heard
The sound of anklets....

I followed her through
The dense forest
Through shrubs , bushes , and trees
Mountains and valleys....

She never looked behind
But kept on running
Until she reached
The steepest edge of a mountain

She Looked down for a few minutes
And said her quick prayers
Then with a look of sadness
She jumped down and down

At that very moment an elderly looking man appeared
And cried " Mary , NO , DONT DO IT"
But he was too late
Mary had jumped down

He too sat down
On the same mountain
And sang a solitary song
And jumped down saying

"Mary , My daughter
Just don't worry
I am coming too
Only for you..........."

Hope you liked it!

11 comments:

Creativity!! said...

Superb Fantastic Poem :D

Little Poetess said...

thanks creativity :D

Little Poetess said...

thanks creativity :D

Sakshi said...

Ohh you have a wandering mind for a 12 year old princess...it's amazing to see that you can handle writing about many emotions...hmmm loneliness that's an amazing piece you have put up.

From rainbows to solitude...you are growing up my little sweetheart..

huggs

Little Poetess said...

thank you very much sakshi!
Ya I am trying to write about emotions!

huggs
lil poetess

Sakshi said...

psst...psst...I want a girlish layout here..roses and all makes me think of you as a big girl and I don't want you to be one so soon...sobs!!

Princess Sonshu said...

Wow...superbly written..i visited after a long time...i like the new template...hugs! mwah..keep it going..

on my blog...150th post is coming so theres gonna be celebration..so keep chking!

Little Poetess said...

well sakshi
if there is one thing that can never go down it is age!
So , when I guess even i have to be a big little poetess!!
lov
lil poetess

Little Poetess said...

thank u sonshu
congrats on ur 150th post!

droL said...

i like your poems here. im glad i've dropped by.

you see, what makes me wander around the net is to look for blogs similar to my own. and i see we share the same passion.

I also have a blog on poetry.

keep writing. Kudos!

aathira said...

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