Thursday, October 01, 2009

A Bad Prison

No peace in this world
Filled with hatred
Only few spots of love
In the loneliest places

No one greets each other
No one will ever shake hands
No child will help his father
Or run errands for his mother

This world is like an iron cage
Whose lock is lost somewhere
Find it and let us out
To make it peaceful everywhere

Now everyone snorts and grunts
With a cruel angry look
When will it change into laughs and smiles
With a pleasant beautiful face

3 comments:

Creativity!! said...

Woww :D SO Beautiful Touching Poem :) Dear, Excellent :) :) Very Well Written :) :)

All The Very Best Success :) :)

Sakshi said...

Oh my that's a real real heart wrenching poem from a sweet little gal! First of all I am so sorry that I came here late...was a bit tied up with other things. How are you doing and how is ur studies going?

I don't know what to say about this poem. You do observe a lot abt things going around you don't you? Beautiful...hugs and love for a special little girl

Parita said...

So true! Beautifully written